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The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

------------------------- This is my first post and I am looking forward to reading your comments. The young Barkley ages in this story are: 19, 15, 11, Gene 8 and Audra 7. I wanted to have Heath in...

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Great start, Oh, is Jarrod going to tell them how much fun your favorite sport is? A nice transition but we have to wait. (No fair) I love Jarrod's reflection of how he will find time for each and...

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Re: The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

wonderful. This is so sweet.

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Re: The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

Your first one is wonderful! I'm curious of part II. You discribe all Barkley kid's so sweet, expecially Heath!

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Already the Pappy! Instead of thinking of ways of enjoying his own summer relaxing, he's coming up with ways to spend time with his siblings -- always the family man. Welcome to the board, Cas! HUGS!...

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Congrats on your first post, cas! I love stories about the little Barkleys and I can't wait to hear Jarrod's talk with Nick about kisses!

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Welcome to our newest writer. I applaud your imagination and characterization of Jarrod. I also enjoyed your true life story on a child's perception of age as related to size. Children are so logical...

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Congratulations, Cas, on your first posting. How wonderful to see the '5 Young Barkleys' and what they may have been like. I love a story line where Heath joins the family as a child. Already you can...

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Re: The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

Great first story Cas !!! I loved Jarrod's homecoming. I can't wait to find out what the favorite sport is. Hurry back !!! Laura

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Re: The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

Good start. Now with that favourite sport.

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Re: The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

Very nice first post, Cas. I'm looking forward to more. Debbie

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Re: The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

What a great big brother! Looking forward to more.

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Re: The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

Wonderful first post! Can't wait for Part II! I warn you though writing becomes addictive, now that you've started there will be no going back (heehee). Simply Terrific, LC

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Re: The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

What a sweet little tale. I really love envisioning the Barkley children at such a young age. Looking forward to the next part Cas, and congrats on your first post!

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Re: The Fifth Musketeer. Chapter I of II

Good job on your first story, Cas! This is a sweet story and I'm looking forward to the second part. Is the favorite sport "kissing"? Hurry back with part 2! Sara

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Hooray! You did it! I was afraid you weren't going to post it, and it is a very sweet story showing the fatherly role that Jarrod took toward his younger siblings. Very well done and original idea....

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